| Children's Category 2nd Prize
SMS Alert : "Peace, Man! :p" (Original)
Yunitha Ratnadilla T. A. K. (Age 14, Indonesia) SMP N 8 Yogyakarta
As people know, school should be the most
comfortable place to develop our knowledge and gain as much as academic and
social experiences in our youth. That is the ideal idea. But in fact, recently,
schools are no longer a comfortable place to study in. Why? Because its
function has already changed. Not only becoming an education source, but now it
also has become a place that I call a battle field. Why I said so?
School is a battle field because the
atmosphere of competition is all around. The competition that I mean here is
not only about the subjects mark's race between friends, but it is more about
the competition of the prestigious life. Doing a social relationship and making
friends in my school mean that we have to join a gang, such as in clever
students communities, rich students clubs, nerds, cheerleaders, and so on.
Majority and minority are the main issue. Until now, this condition has trapped
all students -including me- to live everyday with this kind of "rule".
This problem makes me sometimes feel really
uncomfortable to be in school because I can not find any peace there. According
to my observation, gangs, clubs, groups, of course have the potential to create
disputes and jealousy. I believe so because I have ever been in that condition
and here is the story:
In my class, the gender dispute often comes
up. Usually, the dispute happens between boys and girls. The reason why this
could be happened mostly because of a simple misunderstanding or egoism. One
problem such as a personal humiliation which is intended to be a joke could be
a source of dispute that creates an inter-gendered communication
deadlock in my class. When we have this problem, the atmosphere of my class
would likely be as cold as Himalaya or as silent as a cemetery. It is true.
Seeing this condition was a heartbreaking
moment for me because deep down in my heart I want to be neutral. I want to be
fair. I want to listen both sides and still make friends with my boy and girl
friends. Feeling tired of this, I was searching for any way to stop this
chilling atmosphere. And suddenly I got an idea!! I got this idea soon after I
observe that almost my entire classmates own cell phones.
Soon after school, I picked my cell phone and
started to write a SMS and sent it to all of my classmates in grade 8-2, with a
short message "to all friends that I love: PEACE MAN!(8_2). For me it
was a trial and error moment because I had no ability to predict what would
happen tomorrow morning in my class. Would there be another madness or what? I
even wasn't able to sleep that night!!
In the next morning, with a shaking knee and
cold hand, I walked into the class. Along the way that I passed, my mind wildly
imagined about what happen inside my class. But when I arrived in front of its
door, I was wondered by the situation. You know what? Avice, the boys' gang's
leader and Christine, the girls' gang's leader were making a conversation. But
this time was not a dispute. They were talking nicely with smiles and laughter.
The same things also happened to the rest of the class. They were chatting
together. What's happen?
Soon after I was approached by Avice, Christine
and the rest of the class. They all thanked me for the SMS that I had sent.
They said that by the time they receive the SMS, they soon realized that the
disputes had torn our class apart. They said no one ever tell them about it
before. No one had the courage to remind them that we, as a whole class,
actually in love and care upon each other. They also said that they actually
had been missing the feeling of togetherness after all.
That day for me was a magical day. Because it
was the moment when I had the opportunity to gain my dream, which is creating
peace in my own environment. Starting by my closest environment: friends. I
never imagine that technology could help me to spread the seed of peace to my
friends.
Taking the advantage from my experience, I
really wish that other teens in the world would like to do the same thing like
me: using the benefit of technology to break the communication deadlock among
the inter-friends disputes. If we can do this, I believe that the seed of peace
would grow. And one day we will be able to see the beauty of the peace-flower
that we have been waiting to be harvested. Now, just take your cell phone and
send this message to the people that you actually love:
"Peace,
Man! :p" |